In the morning, we didn’t have life drawing class, we went to the cambridge university botanic gardens to do some detailed drawing on flowers, I am glad that the weather was good in the morning, which gave a great experience and kind of chilled down from the stress I was having this week.
In the afternoon, I continue on my FMP, I did an one-on-one tutorial with Jo, she found out some points, they are not a big problem, but they will influence the reader experiment in a significant way. Therefore, I will experiment with the colour tone when I finished all the pages. Moreover, the grammatical problem. I will give my tutors to check when I finish them. If they don’t have time, I will find my friend to help me with that. As the target reader for this comic is more on english reader, which grammatical problem will interpret the experience for readers.